black manta beta

[scarletspider5]

sorry about the pictures. there is none but try him out. http://www.sendspace.com/file/vzyzd9

[Spidermew]

Ok i tryed him out....
He has lots of problems......
Fist is how chopy it is, when you walk its like you dont have enough frames of animation...
This is actualy ture for all his animations, including pucnches and kicks and jumping.
He stands allot lower on a stage then your standard ryu does, you probly did that on axident or to compensite for his size IDK..
When you try to throw, you end up swriving behind the other character and nothing happens.
Next is sprite quality, youve got allot of extra black pixil's on the outline and it looks realy weird, like his outline is overly thick. And his head has little detal, the head looks like its from an NES game. It looks like a NES or ms paint head on a gray iceman with lots of extra outline pixils.
Also when your making something black, stick to one color of black, in the throw that dosnt work, some of his colors look pukebrown.

He also only has one kick and 3 punches, no specials or anything, but i guess that was intentional.
Personaly I would have wated till I had allot more done with it before i put out a beta. But im not you.
Go back to the srpites, clean them up and add a bit more detale. If you have to dont actualy color stuff in black, use blue and other colors, just make a black pallette, its allot easyer to see the difernt shades of blue or red sometimes then it is in black and gray. His head should be colored differntly then other parts of him anyway so that when you do edit pallettes you can have other styles, like comic style, or alex ross style, or even Super Friends style.

[MÅÐKÅT]

Somebody can post any shots??? One at least Thnx

[Alexziq]

Just keep working on him. A lot of folks appreciate you sharing early beta's so we can see your progress. Animations are fun to edit, so Im sure it will get better. If you need advice just keep asking. Infinity is a good place for people to find help.

Keep truckin

[Weapon x program]

you are on the good way

[OrwellianDawn]

Fairly enjoyable foray.

[Spidermew]

Im sorry if my post may have come off as rude. Just keep at it.  I wish you best of luck with this project.

[Lightblackheart]

very nice is your first creation right?
it is a beta?
downloaded end tested 

[scarletspider5]

this is my first character. I tried. I just can't get him like this in the video. http://www.esnips.com/doc/dfce5d94-0b98-4b37-9d74-ec2429c0d238/DFighter-Revolution-Preview this just proves that I am the worst mugen creator.

[scarletspider5]

I'll start him over and do a better job. I suck don't I.

[Jay_High19]

I suck don't I.

jk

There was no reason to release this character, especially this incomplete. I wouldn't even say he's a beta, possibly an alpha. This is the kind of character you have just to test his progress, not to release him. He doesn't even have any running, jumping, get hit or a whole lotta other sprites. Give yourself some time to try to make characters. He's better than Sinestro, but he's still pretty horrible.

UPCOMING CHARACTERS.

  black manta must be done by halloween.
  Next project DareDevil thanksgiving special.
  invisable woman christmas special.
  DareDevil must begin  November 1,07
  invisable woman must begin December 1,07

Give yourself some time to complete the characters, your a brand new creator and you think you can all these done within less than a month. Not saying give up creating, just take it slow. One creation at a time.

Somebody can post any shots??? One at least Thnx

[scarletspider5]

I didn't put that in his files.

[scarletspider5]

Okay I'mdoing him over. Should I have him throw that rocket for stand strong punch?

[Lightblackheart]

this is my first character. I tried. I just can't get him like this in the video. http://www.esnips.com/doc/dfce5d94-0b98-4b37-9d74-ec2429c0d238/DFighter-Revolution-Preview this just proves that I am the worst mugen creator.

no you are not the worst,you are only beggining no worries atleast i liked him

[Jay_High19]

I didn't put that in his files.

[scarletspider5]

I know I didn't put those. My brother might of done that. He use's my name.

[Bud the C.H.U.D.]

Those are G.M Spectre's sprites.

Do you have his permission?

[DARKTALBAIN]

yeah ScarletSpider give yourself some time to get characters done . You are starting only a month in advance ? Don't rush them , they will be better in the long run even if they take a few monthe to create .


 

[thefisherkings]

Am i the only one who doesn't have the chars in that video, I been away for three months did I miss something?

By the way, if this is your first character, Its better sprites than I could do, I'm sure you will get the hang of it

[Spidermew]

Am i the only one who doesn't have the chars in that video, I been away for three months did I miss something?

By the way, if this is your first character, Its better sprites than I could do, I'm sure you will get the hang of it

Video? o_0? what video?

[thefisherkings]

this is my first character. I tried. I just can't get him like this in the video. http://www.esnips.com/doc/dfce5d94-0b98-4b37-9d74-ec2429c0d238/DFighter-Revolution-Preview this just proves that I am the worst mugen creator.

That video.  If found the chars to but they were not for mugen

[Spidermew]

this is my first character. I tried. I just can't get him like this in the video. http://www.esnips.com/doc/dfce5d94-0b98-4b37-9d74-ec2429c0d238/DFighter-Revolution-Preview this just proves that I am the worst mugen creator.

That video.  If found the chars to but they were not for mugen

i must have been blind. o0? Looks like the video of some sort of warehouser

[SanjiSasuke]

this is my first character. I tried. I just can't get him like this in the video. http://www.esnips.com/doc/dfce5d94-0b98-4b37-9d74-ec2429c0d238/DFighter-Revolution-Preview this just proves that I am the worst mugen creator.

That video.  If found the chars to but they were not for mugen

i must have been blind. o0? Looks like the video of some sort of warehouser

WOW! SUper dead on look at his other folders