should i contiue?

[warecus]

critique welcome


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[Macaulyn97]

her right leg is too thick

[trexrell44]

critique welcome


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If you thin out the legs and and change the hair you have a winner.

[Macaulyn97]

about the hair you could use Mamiya's from Hokuto No Ken

[HyperVoiceActing]

Something about the chest bothers me. Same for the sash around her waist

[esn23]

yes besides the legs being too big the rest looks wonderful and i love your custom hair looks a lot better than some of the other stuff i have seen floating around

[warecus]

here we go better?



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[ATiC3]

Hair needs shading, but the rest is golden. XD

[Twinimage]

The original hair you had actually didn't look bad. Something not quite right about it, but it was much better than the hair in your last sprite.
Maybe if you used that hair with the face from Capcom's sprites of Jean Grey.

There are a number of people working on Phoenix. Maybe you should consider helping someone else out with theirs, rather than start your own?

[trexrell44]

Without really messing with the integrity of your sprite I made a small edit.

[HyperVoiceActing]

Hair is better but the face really bothers me. I think it's the eyes, either too big or too angry