August - Take Two (Newest: Ms. Marvel WIP)

[AugustAPC]

Hey guys, after being turned off of the forum by some, in my opinion, immature moderation, I've decided to come back and give it a second try. So anyway, I'll try and build up a gallery. Comments and criticism always welcome.


Ms. Marvel (WIP)
I'm still working on her hands. Going to give them a more unique positioning if I get around to it.

[HyperVoiceActing]

Uniform is too bright IMO

[.Batzarro.]

She looks pretty cool, her head/face especially. Anatomy seems a bit odd in some areas.

[AugustAPC]

Uniform is too bright IMO

I don't feel dark colors suit the MvC style, the colors are all rather bright in it.

She looks pretty cool, her head/face especially. Anatomy seems a bit odd in some areas.

Appreciate the comment. But let's be real here, sprites aren't notorious for anatomical accuracy. Quite the contrary.

But what parts did you find to be odd?

[UltraRoboninja]

Looks pretty good. Looking forward to seeing it animated. The colors seem light to me too, but it's no big deal. The only thing I'd suggest is to either make the white of her eyes smaller or include her actual eyeballs instead of the white, depending on which version of her mask you're going for. Good luck!

[AugustAPC]

Er, I don't mean to disappoint, but I never had any plans to animate it >.>. Not sure where ya got that from.

I may just do it though. Gotta please the crowd.

I suppose it's just personal taste of mine, the light colors. I just don't see some thicker, darker colors fitting the MvC style very well, though I can see why some people could find it to be more crisp.

I'll do an alternate palette of it, just to appease the curiosity.

Thanks for all the comments, guys.

[UltraRoboninja]

Er, I don't mean to disappoint, but I never had any plans to animate it >.>. Not sure where ya got that from.

Oh, I saw the word "WIP" in the title and I thought it was a character WIP. I didn't realize it was in the Graphic Arts section.

[AugustAPC]

Aight. New project. Scratch Raven from DC.

I'm doing kinda a cross appearance from the comics and the Teen Titans cartoon.

Obviously its a huge WIP. I've got a lot to do to her costume, and I'm gonna play with my shading, but tell me what you guys think so far.

[.Batzarro.]

Doesn't look too bad. The torso is too stretched out though and the arms might be a bit short, will be able to tell once the torso is cut down some. The arm that's extended in front of her has too big of a hand. Still pretty good for it being from scratch, I have a major problem with doing that myself.

[AugustAPC]

Really can't agree with the torso at all, maybe you're not distinguishing her crotch from her midriff?

As for the hands, her right hand looks smaller because she's tilting it upward, though I'm still working on that perspective.