my first sprite edit

[drdestiny]

(if something is wrong sorry for bad english)
I always wanted to see some mass effect characters in mugen
so this is samara from mass effect 2

body and face from rogue
legs and hands from scratch

[AugustAPC]

It's very hard to critique your sprite because of the size of which you're showing it to us. It's also blurred by anti-aliasing.

From what I can see, its pretty good for your first attempts. However, her anatomy is all over the place. Her pose is very awkward. Her feet are pointed inward, as if she is off balance, and her arms looks like they're flailing.

I'd really like the see the sprite at it's original size, without the jpeg blur.

[BLue BoMBeR]

go easy on him dude, he said its his 1st sprite..

by the way, dont save it as jpeg. it will ruin the sprite/pics

[Vitamin]

Can we see the sprite as a png? When you save your sprite as jpeg you lose all the details in your sprites. But if i was to judge how your sprite looked I would have to say it does look like samara to a degree. You made the shoulder pads a bit longer than there suppose to be (they don't go down all the way to her biceps).

But can you post the sprite again in it's original size and as a png.

[drdestiny]

sorry for problems with jpeg
there it is

thanks for critic
i wanted to make something similar to this

[AugustAPC]

go easy on him dude, he said its his 1st sprite..

by the way, dont save it as jpeg. it will ruin the sprite/pics

I didn't realize I was being at all harsh.

[Vitamin]

sorry for problems with jpeg
there it is

thanks for critic
i wanted to make something similar to this

Ok now I can give you a proper evaluation. The sprite needs more shading entirely, because I can't see any type of shading on her body besides the legs. Samara's costume is very detailed, but your still missing some details on her suit, such as the lines that run across her suit. She is also isn't that blue...so I would suggest giving her a lighter blue skin tone like in the picture below. She is very light blue in the face, but her hair is a slightly darker blue. Your also missing the gold thing around her neck. But for your sprite this is pretty good. Did you sprite this from scratch or did you use a series of bases?

[drdestiny]

ive used rogues face and body
legs and hands from scratch
i know theres some missing parts!i try to update her
and thanks everybody for comments