SpiderMew's WIP's - First you inhale the magic!

[Spidermew]

Does this suck?
I just noticed the glitch in one of the frames on the upper half of the image. Would it be better if he didnt walk but floated?

[-Whiplash-]

He needs some sort of upper body movement.

but other then that great!

[jurk]

Does this suck?
I just noticed the glitch in one of the frames on the upper half of the image. Would it be better if he didnt walk but floated?

He will slide on butter when he goes backward

[Spidermew]

He needs some sort of upper body movement.

but other then that great!

Yes i can see, he needs to bounch a bit more.
I can tell better now that ive put doom next to him.

[juelz aka wolfi]

this character has a lot of potential
you want sum ideas or you covered?
peace

[♦ßlôödÑinjå♦]

Of course Toast shooting out of his head to the opponent is open for consideration.

Because everyone knows all toaster's toast, toast.

[Spidermew]

this character has a lot of potential
you want sum ideas or you covered?
peace

Feal free to post any ideas you have.

[juelz aka wolfi]

1) giant toaster finisher (like kishios donald having a huge burger desend on opponent and crushing them)
2) royal toaster flush (gambit move in the air and throws toasted bread in waves)
3) toaster bomb (throws toaster and it detonates after 3 secs)
4) butter slide ( like subzeros ground ice move and opponent fumbles across towards you)
5) poisonous jam (comes out like spidermans webbing ) (sticky jam that takes away a quarter of life)
6) toaster rush (waves of toasters come runnin at opponent)
7) toaster hadouken (toaster throw)
8 ) ultimate toaster punches (has toasters as boxing gloves and combos opponent like crazy till dizzy think balrog      punches?)
9) toaster train ( think magneto here with toasters magnetically floating around the king then he points towards opponent and the toasters just fly towards opponent like a train hitting them then circle back again for another hit
10) toastee fatality (lifts opponent in air and dunks him in big toaster to be toasted and comes out burnt but dead)


thats all i could think of i know prob 1 or 2 r lame well let me know what u fink?
peace and gud luck

[Spidermew]

Ok i think i fixed this.

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[jurk]

Ok i think i fixed this.

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IMHO, the rhytm of the upper body doesn't match with the legs... and because of this toastmaster seems to backwalk doing little jumps

[.Batzarro.]

Ok i think i fixed this.

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What jurk said pretty much. It looks good but doesn't seem to be in sync right. Right now it seems like he's limping a bit.

[Vitamin]

It's great seeing progress on your character, but it appears that Toaster King has a little bounce in his step in your animation.

[ATiC3]

Can you make the walk smoother? Add more frames? Maybe that will help...

[Rage]

Ok i think i fixed this.

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your timing is off good sir. I like to offer some add vice here seeing as animation is my major.

Your  character does have and unnatural bounce. the first thing to do is get ride of that.

second correct the timing on the feet. it looks as if hes doing some weird shuffle.

then you need to sink the legs movement up with the chest. Look at your doc doom example then look at yours......

Post Merge: February 24, 2010, 07:39:51 PMOn another note tho if you want a weird shuffle walk then you timing is perfect. the shuffle is in perfect sink with the oddball bounce.

[Spidermew]

Well i do want him to be an odd guy, and im sure not allot of people will actualy walk with him .
Its just not easy matching up doom's backwards walk which has only 8 frames to sabertooth's that has 10
The chest actualy only matches the legs with 2 frames, because sabertooth turns his torso when he walks back, its very organic.
Doom's is more stratigic and robotic from his armor.
If i just made him fly blackwards like he didnt have any need to walk then it would be easy to make it look smother.
Cant work on it today so i'll see what happens when I try to make the walk forward...

[DARKTALBAIN]

second correct the timing on the feet. it looks as if hes doing some weird shuffle.

To the left , to the left , to the right to the right....

 

Well i do want him to be an odd guy, and im sure not allot of people will actualy walk with him .
Its just not easy matching up doom's backwards walk which has only 8 frames to sabertooth's that has 10
The chest actualy only matches the legs with 2 frames, because sabertooth turns his torso when he walks back, its very organic.
Doom's is more stratigic and robotic from his armor.
If i just made him fly blackwards like he didnt have any need to walk then it would be easy to make it look smother.
Cant work on it today so i'll see what happens when I try to make the walk forward...

The only thing that I could see you doing here, is just use dooms exact walk. You are already using doom's arms, so just change his chest into toaster kings. It wouldn't even be that tough to do, then add the fur & toaster head. When you are mixing things that have a different amount of frames it usually looks odd at some point. The only other fix would be to just add those 2 extra frames to the lags, which is even harder than what I first suggested.   

[Vitamin]

I just had an interesting idea for a super for Toaster King.  Toaster king summons a toaster-tank that he jumps in, and runs over or shoots his opponent with.

[Spidermew]

I just had an interesting idea for a super for Toaster King.  Toaster king summons a toaster-tank that he jumps in, and runs over or shoots his opponent with.

 

Toaster tank eh. Thats a cool idea. 

[♦ßlôödÑinjå♦]

The toaster tank is definitely a great idea!

[Ununsed-Username]

Toaster tank FTW!

[Vitamin]

With a bit of editing, you can turn this sprite into a toaster tank...

Of course finishing the characters basic moves does come first...

[Spidermew]

Yeah I defently will include the toaster tank.

I want to finish all those basics first before i move on to more wackyness.

[tremainekr]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H1GIYBhCnCo&NR=1#

1.he sticks a fork in his head. and shoot electricty like cables hyper beam or storm hyper

2.jelly gun..makes opponent stay still..us spidermans web ball sprites just color them purple

3.butter he aims south east towards ground and shoots out butter. opponets slips if the step on it.

4.two pieces of toast jump out of his head color amingo helpers brown..their names can be...el pan(spanish name for bread) and

tostado(spanish name for toast). toaster made in mexico (easy to find sprites and they are square shaped)

5. or he has a robot body and he is fightin to find his real robot head ( he just walked through his kitchen castle and grabed the

toaster and went to find his stolen head). throws toaster like capitan america throws his sheild.if it hits it comes back too his body if

he miss it lays on the ground like caps shield until he walks back over it.
Post Merge: March 14, 2010, 10:23:40 PM just saw all of the other post:

just askin lets say the robot body powered the missing head and head processed what ever he thought into reality. By him having a

toaster head everything comes out toaster related.

ex. a tank = toaster tank
    
     two warriors = mini toaster minions
    
     multiple rocks and sharp object = flying toaters
 
     machine guns and shoutgun = butter and jelly gun

he would be fun to watch as he struggles in fustration with his new powers. he will say" fell my wrath" then he calls for a flaming

sword and a burnt toast shaped sword appears .

     and he speaks spanish cause the toater was made in mexico.
    

[TGM]

I was planing on the hadoken being a toaster.
The electic coard attack i can easly get from Omega Red, just turn his tentical into a plug.
The marrow attack, i could turn those into plugs, or drills...

go with the fireball dude it will be bad a$$ to see toaster doing a hadouken 

[Vitamin]

I can't wait to see what this character will be like when your finish with him.