Hawkgirl W.I.P by Topper and Trexrell

[Topper]

Hi guys!

If after maybe days of March 2010, Me and Trexrell waited back the first job here.
Hawkgirl had two wings seem equal to Zvitor's Hawkman... hehe
It is new stance animated better.

New Stance:



Month, I do a portrait drawing with only mask, wings, Chun-Li face and Morrigan body.

Portrait:



Sorry I use translate very well.

Bye!

- TP

[Tha Lando ( Le CROM )]

  not bad, not at all my friend.

[elee0031]

From afar she looks like she has a wolverine head.  I like the wing but does it seem a little dark? It might just be me I thought the wings were more white or light grey. She's looking good keep up the good work.

[ATiC3]

You just need to touch up the face more, and maybe lighten the wings.. but you can do that in a different palette...

Uh.. looks really good.. Do you have like 50 frames in just that one stance? .. it looks very fluid.

[Worksa8]

Needs more animation honestly. There are a lot of frames in those wings that is true, but she just bobs up and down and that's it. Your relying on the wing animations a bit too much (Just the ones from the harpy character in Red Earth I think- already fluid like that)

Also, the wings don't quite seem to line up, but I'm not 100% on where her wings should be honestly. They just look off from my perspective.

[DARKTALBAIN]

Lavia does have a lot of frames to her wing animation.

I have to agree, towards the end of the animation on Hawkgirl,  it seems you didn't place the wings properly. Work on aligning them better

[elee0031]

Did anyone else see those huge biceps hawkgirl is packing?     She'd give Rogue and Chun-Li a run for their money.

[Berkay]

maybe some pixels should be corrected in this area (looks like they jumping out)?

[Topper]

maybe some pixels should be corrected in this area (looks like they jumping out)?

Ah, yet well I'll update a wing... ^^

[Worksa8]

Did anyone else see those huge biceps hawkgirl is packing?     She'd give Rogue and Chun-Li a run for their money.

You would be ripped too carrying that big mace around all day...Must throw her off balance at times xD
(Should make her with like one arm from Zangief, and the other normal, haha xD)

[MuηkyMØÜf]

Great animation on the wings. looks very fluent