Stage:Nintendo DS

[DanOwnsall112]

My very first stage comes with music



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This isn't much but its something  

[Dzayan, The Warrior]

lots of colour loss

[Worksa8]

So, it's his first attempt. It takes time to get a stage color or Hi res right.
This isn't that bad actually, I mean you got the reflections down. Good attempt, but still room to improve.
Welcome to Infinity by the way ^^

Edit: I just had a thought. Why not take the platform from the pictochat stage in Brawl, just the "Now entering" platform. then use that was one layer sprite, then have a hite background with just animated line drawings going on.
A simpl-ish pictochat stage right there xD

[Dzayan, The Warrior]

nice music choice by the way

[ATiC3]

I would suggest that if you're going to make a stage like that.. make it hi-res so there is not much color loss... but pretty good for your first stage...

[DanOwnsall112]

You mean like this 




I made these when i read your post 

[Worksa8]

Yeah now your on a roll. That looks like it would fit better too.
Maybe have like a bunch of random black doodles on the background, possibly like a bunch of marvel, capcom, whatever characters were just leaving messages or something. Ie: "Ken <3 Eliza 4 ever"
I'm just thinking out loud here I guess, you do what you want to do, but you should keep making stages and use your imagination. There is so much more you can do then just take a simple picture for a BG.

[Luxion]

junk stage this is not even a stage is just a picture of a DS and by the way is ridiculous stage

[Dzayan, The Warrior]

junk stage this is not even a stage is just a picture of a DS and by the way is ridiculous stage

dude its his first stage

[Z4kaR1]

dude its his first stage

That isn't a excuse.
He should practice before he release something.

[Worksa8]

He just wants to contribute silver, and you can only practice so much yourself. Sometimes the best help is the kind you get from the community...way of helping him out guys. If you think the stage is so terrible, and don't want to help, then don't download and go about your business.
Anyways, I think that layer he just did up above looks better, and it shows he is already improving.

[Orochi Gill]

Wanting to contribute and first stage are no excuses or are poor excuses at that.

A creator should be able to take feedback no matter that the creation is or the quality of it.

[Worksa8]

Sorry Orochi, no one is perfect, especially with the very first thing they make or try something. OF course they should be able to take feed back and improve, but thats what SHOULD be happening, rather then "It just sucks" then not offering to help or at least say what needs work.

[DanOwnsall112]

OK I just started my pictochat wip stage check it out at the wip section