iron spider mugen wip alot done!

[iron spider]

i am working on a iron spider mugen char and it is now 78% here is the stance and here are some videos.


stance

[youtube=425,350]ISwu5ZAQWU4[/youtube]
video

[youtube=425,350]_DTx5KkYHys[/youtube]
2nd video

[.Batzarro.]

stance





Thought I'd post this for you since it's not showing up in your first post. Still won't show the stance for some reason though.

Anyways, pretty good for a first WIP. Though the tentacles could use more work and could be utilized a bit more in the char. Either way, it's a learning process and I'm sure you'll improve over time. Good job.

[iron spider]

here i am trying again to post the new stance

[Jmaxximus]

here i am trying again to post the new stance

Thats a good stance. May need a few more frames the idea is good.

[Rage]

looking good so far i say the steel arms are the onlt thing that  needs work now.

[spiderclone]

everything needs to be redone

[BLue BoMBeR]

you can use shuma gorath's tentacles

[Warrior]

Hey, I have some suggestions;

-I think you should start over...the shading is really poor...try finding a Spiderman character with a single colour pallete, and then ask the creator if you can use the sprites from that character. Off the top of my head, Erradicator made one. But remember to ask for permission

-For the tentacles, try constructing it out of marrow's bones....

-Lastly, you can always refer to this thread for colours, etc.
http://z6.invisionfree.com/Marvel_The_Outsider/index.php?showtopic=383..I like Dark Claw's concept personally...

Good luck
-Turbanator

[PsychoticMarik]

here i am trying again to post the new stance

This looks better, although the right leg(spidermans right leg)looks really awkward.
I like the stance, but that leg is just wierd looking...

[DARKTALBAIN]

Hey, I have some suggestions;

-I think you should start over...the shading is really poor...try finding a Spiderman character with a single colour pallete, and then ask the creator if you can use the sprites from that character. Off the top of my head, Erradicator made one. But remember to ask for permission

-For the tentacles, try constructing it out of marrow's bones....

-Lastly, you can always refer to this thread for colours, etc.
http://z6.invisionfree.com/Marvel_The_Outsider/index.php?showtopic=383..I like Dark Claw's concept personally...

Good luck
-Turbanator

  

Good Luck to you   Iron Spider . I hope you complete this character with a good revamp of the sprites

[Rage]

Okay i guess it time to lay down the hammer, tell the real biz. Okay this is good for a start but . . . .. . .


Stance_  the stance isnt that bad but needs some more frames and movement. As of now u got one frame sliding up and down. Not good, have him move stightly other then a cheap sliding.  Also spiderman in nibble but standing on the tip of his foot is unatural, even for him. Hes not a ballet dancer.

Tenticacles_  They look like wet noodles. they need sum stucture. Iron spiders legs are in three segmentsnot counting the feet. I like the fact that u stayed wit the original design of three legs but they need shape.

Shading_ he looks like he came out of a coloring book. His name is iron spider but yet hes a flat red wit no shading let alone any highlights to inidcate that he;s wearing metal



Why my oppinion change? Cuz b4 i was being nice and waiting to c were you were going to go and give more feed back as i c more but i see others feel u need to start this the right way and build up. In others words im in the wrong cuz i did give the feed back that could help u grow and depic a better image of what ur trying present. Rage is sorry.

[The King Sic-1™]

Not bad....

but i think the shading an be better and the spider arms could be be better as well... you should make him look more like he does in the comic...

here is an edit i did.... and i know he only has 3 arms... but i did 4 because i think he looks better with 4...because it is just an edit!

[Acey]

 

Iron Spider, you took on one big job. All those tenticles will be a daunting task to make sure the just don't look like cheap MS Paint lines.

It would be best to draw just the tenticles separatly and animate them. Make one version for the stance, one for moving forwards (works for attacking too), crouch attacks, jump attacks and for the "get hit" sprites. This way you're only making about 7 different tenticle animations, they don't even have to be that different. At that point you'll have to learn programming and code in the tenticles as "helpers" much like Captain America's shield.

Keep up the good work, you'll get there.

[Rage]

Not bad....

but i think the shading an be better and the spider arms could be be better as well... you should make him look more like he does in the comic...

here is an edit i did.... and i know he only has 3 arms... but i did 4 because i think he looks better with 4...because it is just an edit!

 

[iron spider]

i am starting over because i hear of people saying start over and now i show you the new sprite

here

[Dzayan, The Warrior]

i am starting over because i hear of people saying start over and now i show you the new sprite

here

it looks like he has a horn comming out of his head

[The King Sic-1™]

i am starting over because i hear of people saying start over and now i show you the new sprite

here

not soo much start over... just make sure you get all the detail iron spiderman needs...

you new edit shows a lil detail.. but where is the rest?

look at my edit... you can even use the same pallet if ya want, so you get more of a gold look.

but the spider on the chest needs to be more detailed... looks at the comics to get a better idea.

[Jelux Da Casual]

...i know he only has 3 arms... but i did 4 because i think he looks better with 4...because it is just an edit!

Well, the M.V.P. Scarlet Spiders have 4 arms, so well just say it's one of them.

[iron spider]

what about sludges iron spider from the amazing spiderman char

[zxzero]

i think his extra arms should come out when he does specials or supers, instead of always being out like doc octopus or sumthing, in the comics, they werent always out either, and it would be easier to sprite with less time, just have different moves, stance, and specials/supers, the potential of this spider-man is off the charts tho, good luck to you!

[Sparticus2299]

great sprite

[iron spider]

here is my redo i am keeping

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cKRkimTSo3k[/video]

stance


standing light punch

[Acey]

what about sludges iron spider from the amazing spiderman char

That sprite is by Jason Todd

[Founder of SonicX]

Great Job if you need some tips on frankenspriting thats my talent

[Dzayan, The Warrior]

his punch needs like 2 more frames