Kilowog (Green Lantern of Space Sector 647)

[DARKTALBAIN]

this might be used for an intro or win pose...
do you like it?

 

[♦ßlôödÑinjå♦]

It looks great keep it up!

[Playing Enemy]

I like that winpose sprite a lot. The only thing that stands out to me is that the backs of his biceps look too straight edged and cut out. They just need to come out a little more where they meet his chest. I just made a quick edit cause it might be easier to show you than to try and decipher my crappy explanations.

[MuηkyMØÜf]

these sprites look good. are they based off other chars or are they made from scratch? I only ask cuz I was thinking of Thanos looking at some of them.

[DARKTALBAIN]

I like that winpose sprite a lot. The only thing that stands out to me is that the backs of his biceps look too straight edged and cut out. They just need to come out a little more where they meet his chest. I just made a quick edit cause it might be easier to show you than to try and decipher my crappy explanations.

Explanation is crappy  Sprite display looks great

[amarillo002]

I like that winpose sprite a lot. The only thing that stands out to me is that the backs of his biceps look too straight edged and cut out. They just need to come out a little more where they meet his chest. I just made a quick edit cause it might be easier to show you than to try and decipher my crappy explanations.

am i blind?  i cant see a difference there...

[Esʞy]

The biceps are more round and don't look like they were cut out by a two year old with scissors. lm(fudging)ao 
See the second one is more flat on the sides and at the bottom it doesn't have that curvature.

[yosifun]

This is bettter:


What he meant is the arms should stick out a bit more so it doesn't look like the outer lines of the arms merges with the outer lines or the mid-section.

[amarillo002]

now i saw it 
i was still sleepy last time 

[DARKTALBAIN]

now i saw it 
i was still sleepy last time 

yes it's a quick fix, minor detail, but on a sprite that is standing still, it can makeall the difference

[Playing Enemy]

now i saw it 
i was still sleepy last time 

Yeah, it's definitely not the biggest thing in the world, but it would be an improvement none the less. This Kilowag is looking great though man, especially the new updates you've made to him, keep it up. I made a some portraits for him too, as well as DCvM one (different than normal DCvM ones though) if you ever want to use them. Here's some previews and the pcx's. 



PCX's:
http://www.sendspace.com/file/1aqc1b

[amarillo002]

thanks shulbocka
for the DCVM portrait


Arlequin made this one for me some time ago...(actualy this is where i took kilowog's head colors )

[♦ßlôödÑinjå♦]

  The detail looks great.

[Playing Enemy]

Um...whoah! Yeah, definitely go with Arlequin's. That guy is extremely talented when it comes to making portraits like that, or just anything sprite related at all. That Kilowag one is just impressive.

[The Brave]

Any Dark Lantern pallette or special move?

[HyperVoiceActing]

Does he have any special intros with other Laterns or Sinestro?

[amarillo002]

Any Dark Lantern pallette or special move?

he has a smart pallette so yeah a dark lantern might be possible
special move as a dark lantern i dont think so... at least on the first release (not so soon)

Does he have any special intros with other Laterns or Sinestro?

as a first release not sure... but in the future sure... why not?

im sorry i dont have anythung new to show... RL got me jammed again so not enough time to work...
but im still going forward...slowly but foreward