Author Topic: Hank Pym - Yellowjacket (Read 7558 times)

Genziroz · « **on:** March 19, 2009, 06:19:22 PM »

well im sorry about the things in the other post, i didn't know that base are private, but now im goin to do for my own, and a little help of JASONTODD... thanks to him, i can start my own proyect...

well heres the sprites

Stance

Stand Hard Punch

Gigant Form

Portrit

i thank you all for support me... thank you again see ya

ANGELM · « **Reply #1 on:** March 19, 2009, 06:24:14 PM »

its all about permission and all. good sprites

DARKTALBAIN · « **Reply #2 on:** March 19, 2009, 07:03:25 PM »

That forward leg , something just doesn't look right about it at the hip . You should touch that up a little .

Now as for the Wasp sprites . Just because you found them at an old forum & they seem abandoned . Doesn't mean you can use them . A creator somewhere still made those & could cause you problems using that later down the road . A lot of people just post sprites on other forums . For example , I seen some sprites that I posted here , on esnips . I didn't put them on there . Someone copied it from here & put them there . I'm still working on the character . See my point ?

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ANGELM · « **Reply #3 on:** March 19, 2009, 07:08:37 PM »

to much detail is what you are trying to say? the forward leg is out a little?

DARKTALBAIN · « **Reply #4 on:** March 19, 2009, 07:29:03 PM »

Quote from: ANGELM on March 19, 2009, 07:08:37 PM

to much detail is what you are trying to say? the forward leg is out a little?

No, it's not too much detail . It just doesn't lineup right with where the " underwear " line is . It's hard for me to explain this one .

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Spidermew · « **Reply #5 on:** March 19, 2009, 07:30:01 PM »

The left leg has allot more detale then the right leg. I would suggest making them match by altering the detales on the left to match the rest of his body. Or does he just inject steroids into that leg directly?

ANGELM · « **Reply #6 on:** March 19, 2009, 07:32:41 PM »

Quote from: SpiderMew on March 19, 2009, 07:30:01 PM

The left leg has allot more detale then the right leg. I would suggest making them match by altering the detales on the left to match the rest of his body. Or does he just inject steroids into that leg directly?

steroids? then that would make his calf muscle bigger than the other one.

yea the left leg has more detail then the right. try balancing it a little bit.

Quote from: DARKTALBAIN on March 19, 2009, 07:29:03 PM

No, it's not too much detail . It just doesn't lineup right with where the " underwear " line is . It's hard for me to explain this one .

yea it doesn't line up, work on that too. i get what you mean darktalbain.

Genziroz · « **Reply #7 on:** March 19, 2009, 07:34:23 PM »

yes i see your point, and i dont gonna use this sprites, thanks again for your help

ANGELM · « **Reply #8 on:** March 19, 2009, 07:45:02 PM »

you have to give it something. always go over it and look zoom all the way out so you can get a good view of it. i'm not saying your sprites are bad, i'm just saying put effort into it.

HQ · « **Reply #9 on:** March 19, 2009, 08:04:14 PM »

that wasp sprite was made by LED..u better remove it or something like this happens

and just because someone makes an animation or an simple edit and not turning it into a char doesnt give you the right to use it for you char without asking

anyways good luck

Z999 · « **Reply #10 on:** March 19, 2009, 08:51:52 PM »

Hey, hope you don't mind, edited your sprite to correct a few things (it's easier to explain with a picture for me

) :

It's just a quick edit so it ain't perfect but maybe it will help. You can use it if you want of course...

Genziroz · « **Reply #11 on:** March 19, 2009, 09:01:38 PM »

woa... you guys are amazing, how i can do it?

?.. i only use paint, and i dont know how to do whit photo shop or paint pro, xD.... i need to learn how to do it xD.... well all of it is for yellowjacket xD... some day i will relase it xD

DARKTALBAIN · « **Reply #12 on:** March 19, 2009, 09:11:03 PM »

Quote from: Z666 on March 19, 2009, 08:51:52 PM

Hey, hope you don't mind, edited your sprite to correct a few things (it's easier to explain with a picture for me ) :

It's just a quick edit so it ain't perfect but maybe it will help. You can use it if you want of course...

Z does it again

I was going to fix it for him , but I was at work & just didn't have the time . good job , I figured you would be here soon anyway

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Genziroz · « **Reply #13 on:** March 19, 2009, 09:33:58 PM »

mmm i think that i do it, but i only do it whit the old image(that made z) is the 2 sprite for the animation, moving shoulders or something

that made z

that make i

Excursion · « **Reply #14 on:** March 19, 2009, 09:36:03 PM »

Quote from: Z666 on March 19, 2009, 08:51:52 PM

Hey, hope you don't mind, edited your sprite to correct a few things (it's easier to explain with a picture for me ) :

It's just a quick edit so it ain't perfect but maybe it will help. You can use it if you want of course...

This is what I was trying to tell jason earlier about his shading technique.

http://www.infinitymugenteam.com/Forum_345/index.php?topic=21434.15

Jason, really, practice adding/experimenting with extra colors/shades. Your edits seem a little flat or disproportionate sometimes. Yo have potential, you just have to practice to improve your skills.

Spidermew · « **Reply #15 on:** March 19, 2009, 10:04:17 PM »

Quote from: Noldor on March 19, 2009, 09:01:38 PM

woa... you guys are amazing, how i can do it??.. i only use paint, and i dont know how to do whit photo shop or paint pro, xD.... i need to learn how to do it xD.... well all of it is for yellowjacket xD... some day i will relase it xD

Gimp is free.
I use gimp, i have some videos in the tutoral section (look for the sticky "Sprite Editing the SpiderMew way")

http://gimp-win.sourceforge.net/old.html
I use version 2.2, i like it better.

Weapon x program · « **Reply #16 on:** March 20, 2009, 03:16:48 AM »

Quote from: Excursion on March 19, 2009, 09:36:03 PM

This is what I was trying to tell jason earlier about his shading technique.

http://www.infinitymugenteam.com/Forum_345/index.php?topic=21434.15

Jason, really, practice adding/experimenting with extra colors/shades. Your edits seem a little flat or disproportionate sometimes. Yo have potential, you just have to practice to improve your skills.

you know i just do these edits for fun, in ten minutes so don t expect something great, i understood your point of view the first time. It s getting boring to read your posts. if these edits are so hard for your eyes, no prob i won t do these anymore.

daraku · « **Reply #17 on:** March 20, 2009, 05:06:00 AM »

Quote from: Z666 on March 19, 2009, 08:51:52 PM

Hey, hope you don't mind, edited your sprite to correct a few things (it's easier to explain with a picture for me ) :

It's just a quick edit so it ain't perfect but maybe it will help. You can use it if you want of course...

Wow i like this sprite

Excursion · « **Reply #18 on:** March 20, 2009, 05:56:42 AM »

Quote from: JASONTODD on March 20, 2009, 03:16:48 AM

you know i just do these edits for fun, in ten minutes so don t expect something great, i understood your point of view the first time. It s getting boring to read your posts. if these edits are so hard for your eyes, no prob i won t do these anymore.

There's nothing wrong with constructive criticism to improve your ten minute sprite editing skills. If you're taking that feedback personal then that's really a shame.

KPT25 · « **Reply #19 on:** March 20, 2009, 04:04:46 PM »

Quote from: JASONTODD on March 20, 2009, 03:16:48 AM

you know i just do these edits for fun, in ten minutes so don t expect something great, i understood your point of view the first time. It s getting boring to read your posts. if these edits are so hard for your eyes, no prob i won t do these anymore.

dude,you took Ex's comment the wrong way...constructive criticism is what can make you improve your already good spriting skills jason.
I understamd how hard is to sprite edit,because i tried it myself once(and in paint,so imagine how it turned out

)

danniel · « **Reply #20 on:** March 20, 2009, 10:00:51 PM »

prolly not used to it

Genziroz · « **Reply #21 on:** March 25, 2009, 11:11:36 PM »

new sprites

SPOOKY77 · « **Reply #22 on:** March 25, 2009, 11:25:13 PM »

he had 2 left hands in that third sprite

That Mugen Guy · « **Reply #23 on:** March 25, 2009, 11:27:19 PM »

Quote from: SPOOKY77 on March 25, 2009, 11:25:13 PM

he had 2 left hands in that third sprite

I didn't even notice that and its so obvious

.:K.I.N.G:. · « **Reply #24 on:** March 25, 2009, 11:50:08 PM »

nice
shading/lighting and arm muscles need some work.

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