Phoenix(Jean Grey) W.I.P

[theFuTur3]

hello mugen world

this is my phoenix wip I started so long ago

I have had some help with her over that time period Rai being the latest contributor since we were both working on the same character we decided to collaborate but he and I have been busy with other projects but Im working on her again and I would like you guys input as far as shading and spriting tips and any assistance with her...as you can see I got some sprites done...I have more done but I just wanted some feedback on these and any tips that the infinity can give me...I am really looking to push this to beta status soon   

[kerokero01]

woooow  nice phoenix  ( ^_^)

[dan_aracena]

Look nice .... good luck on your project!!!!!!!!!!!  ..... (Nice detail ... burning Gladiator  )

[SorcererSupreme]

It looks absolutely awesome!I'm a big fan of Jean,i'd love to see this W.I.P in the AvX game,i wish you good luck!

[Brxx]

She looks really good.

But you could do some things, like this first image:

Her hair is flying, but her belt isn't (I don't really know it's name, it's the yellow thing that should fly)

Here... well, she could be looking at him, right? And you have to work a little bit more at her legs. Look at those legs and the other sprite you've done (it's upon this), they look totally different, I mean, it's shadow.

And you could give her hair a little bit of wave, it's so the same, which is not bad for one sprite, but it's bad for an animation. (And I think third sprite should be lighter, though, it's my opinion, and I'm not pretty sure if it would look cooler than actually is)


And this one, well, just change her hair, it is totally storm's


And that one, who's kicking something in the air, I loved her fire effect, looks awesome

Well, good job, good luck. I think she'll be awesome.

[O Ilusionista]

nice

[theFuTur3]

She looks really good.

But you could do some things, like this first image:

Her hair is flying, but her belt isn't (I don't really know it's name, it's the yellow thing that should fly)

Here... well, she could be looking at him, right? And you have to work a little bit more at her legs. Look at those legs and the other sprite you've done (it's upon this), they look totally different, I mean, it's shadow.

And you could give her hair a little bit of wave, it's so the same, which is not bad for one sprite, but it's bad for an animation. (And I think third sprite should be lighter, though, it's my opinion, and I'm not pretty sure if it would look cooler than actually is)


And this one, well, just change her hair, it is totally storm's


And that one, who's kicking something in the air, I loved her fire effect, looks awesome

Well, good job, good luck. I think she'll be awesome.

Thanks for the feedback..i know some of the sprites arent finished but i can def change em for the better  see i need to work on my shading skills...idk y i have a hard time with it but its my main concern.

[Geekinell]

Very cool. Keep it up

[Alex89]

I didn't create it (found on deviantart). Author is Bxx0

[Sinister1ne]

I hope you finish her... really looking forward to a true and absolutely finished 1830 ' s Phoenix.

[malevka2]

Phoenix

[O Ilusionista]

Phoenix

very nice!

[Alex89]

I think her skin and her hair look strange 
Good job, malevka. But it not Jean

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I love that