Black Manta by black dragon

[.black dragon.]

to be honest with you guys I wanted to work on a different character for these two weeks and I pick black manta  are really like him after these two weekends all over I was going to hop back on crossbones 

I need help on the thing on his arm I tried to draw it myself I kept messing it up I need help please any feedback

I finished up black mantis walk I'm kind of lazy is his walking forward in his walking back

and luciangarude help me with the color palette

[HyperVoiceActing]

The helmet looks nice. Although I think you should use a different upper body position for the walk

[warecus]

Could use more contrast on the helmet or more shading

[.black dragon.]

I accidentally put these on Jaspion by Beto 's work
after I was done working on him I was really hungry and I messed up

I fixed a walk maybe you guys might like this more better and trying to work on the jump they kept giving me a headache I try  Magneto but it did not work out I would love to hear your feedback on that   

[Jmaxximus]

The helmet had a good she sale to it. But I think it would be best to add somemore shading to it. It seems a little stiff right now. Also add some more Detail to the body.

You got a good thing going.

[.black dragon.]

The helmet had a good she sale to it. But I think it would be best to add somemore shading to it. It seems a little stiff right now. Also add some more Detail to the body.

You got a good thing going.

thank you so much that means a lot to me  and my uncle are waiting for your Killer Croc
my question is where to put the detail app I'm scared to ruin something and I'm scared to ruin that helmet Superman made it for me

[.black dragon.]

hey guys this is my last update of Black Manta I'm not done but I did what I wanted to do I upgrade him it was better my last work but I have uncle came over to my house and we had a long talk he was courage me to go back to work and on daken I got really far with him but I got stressed out but he was courage me to hop back on him he told me to leave Black Manta alone and to work on daken  he's right that I did got far with himand I told him the mistakes I did he told me to shut the f up he courage me to hop back onto him and I told him the mistakes I did he told me to shut the f up he courage me to hop back onto him
I'm going to go back and fix the mistakes I did to him

[warecus]

i think it was said before but play with the shading on the helmet...the shape is fine so you don't have to worry about that...go to the graphic arts section and see how they play with metal shading...contrast contrast contrast

[Acey]

Looks great BD!

I'm probably just getting too old because I'm like "If I see another Urien base...!"  but hey, it's everyone's right to use the resources available.

[.black dragon.]

Looks great BD!

I'm probably just getting too old because I'm like "If I see another Urien base...!"  but hey, it's everyone's right to use the resources available.

I was going to use Cyclops and AVDOL and  cable

[dev.]

I think Urien and Cable is better than Avdol. Also, add more shading to the helmet. It looks naked.

[.black dragon.]

I will put color in his helmet
I'm working on daken the mistakes I did on him I want to fix them and look good and add more things to him and I'm going to use wolverine Sprites

[.black dragon.]

I tried to put color into the helmet but can't give myself a headache to be honest I like the original look buy lot of people don't like 

[HyperVoiceActing]

I tried to put color into the helmet but can't give myself a headache to be honest I like the original look but lot of people don't like 

Well I don't think it's an instance of people outright hating it, but just thinking it looks silly

[warecus]

If we ate talking about the helmet it should have shading because it would be the only flat sprite on him when everything else is shaded which makes it stand out unecessarily I know I mispelled that

[Beto]

I thought you were working on it. Really the first helmet leaves much to be desired. But is their criterion improve or not 

[.black dragon.]

sorry guys I totally forgot I made this yesterday I was kind of stressing out

[warecus]

Using betos...which looks great would probably make you use cyclops and cable bases