Gypsy WIP

[trexrell44]

This my wip of Gypsy from dc comics. Any C&C would be greatly appreciated.

[DARKTALBAIN]

The upper body looks very nice the animation is a little choppy , though . Her lower half needs some work the legs & her butt looks like it's sagging .

Who is Gypsey anyway ?

[Spidermew]

Your animation looks like it was animated from .jpg files, and jpg files ruin image quality.

Also the movements she makes looks a bit unnatural with the way her legs are.
Try standing yourself in the way you want to have your character stand and move like that, its a good way to see what would work.

[trexrell44]

Gypsy is a member of a couple of groups in the DCU like the Justice League and Birds of Prey. She has illusion powers which  she can also use to turn invisible and other things.Stealth,Precognition,Martial arts, things of that nature. 

[Gaijin]

sounds like Rose from street fighter....sort of....Rose is a Gypsy too. well she head of the gypsy tribes.

[BLue BoMBeR]

looks cartoony.... how about using psylocke as a base?

[trexrell44]

I think that the psylocke  pose was a bit overused so I tried something a little more original.

[DARKTALBAIN]

It is original , but the upper body doesn't really match the lower half in my opinion .

Sounds like a cool character . Someone mentioned Rose . Maybe just use her as a base with some thorough editing .

BTW Mew is right , next time save the animation as a png or gif . The jpg does really ruin the quality

[Alexziq]

Good ole Justice League Detroit.

I can knock it. I never thought I'd think of Vixen as a great character, but now when I see her I get weak in the knees.

I think you should try to pick one of her definative looks though. A cool intro with Martian Manhunter who was like her adopted father would be cool too.

[fer619]

looks like she's trying to balance on a high wire or something

sprites look nice, but maybe you should change that stance

and good luck with her

[trexrell44]

Yeah I looked over it and the pose did need a bit changing. But I want to bring a little more attention to my char so I'm gonna post a special for her. What I have so far is of course a dissapearing move inwhich she charges forward. Chizuru like anti air illustion move. And a high jump acrobatic kick move. And two more moves I was thinging about like an illution concealed firearm attack and or sword(like in the task force) . For those know the charecter do you have any more ideas?

[DARKTALBAIN]

Good ole Justice League Detroit.

I can knock it. I never thought I'd think of Vixen as a great character, but now when I see her I get weak in the knees.

I think you should try to pick one of her definative looks though. A cool intro with Martian Manhunter who was like her adopted father would be cool too.

Now that you bring up the Martian Manhunter thing , I remeber this character

[trexrell44]

Ok here goes the much improved idle stance. Fix the legs and other things. 

[.Batzarro.]

Looks pretty good, but her waist is way too long. Take a look at where her mid section is and how far down her crotch is. If you put those two things much closer together, it'll look a lot better.